The senex stared at the garlic, the little cast-iron pot. Should she summon the Old One? What would it demand this time? But half her staff had been taken, the other half, turned. The chorus-women deserted. Once again the child zealots had led them astray.
She removed the pot, chanting:
The Outsider’s here, siddle-siddle, hiss
Lay the garlic in the pan, make yourself a wish
Round about it go, dance in despair
I’m the one who betrays with a siddle-siddle, kiss.
If only there were some other way to be re-elected.
But at what cost? At what cost??

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What an interesting allegory!
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Why, thank you Neil! So glad you liked it 🙂
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Dear Dora,
A disturbingly magical tale. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle,
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. My disenchantment came through in this one; but it’s the political season, so no surprise there!
Aleichem shalom,
Dora
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If politics has taught us anything, it’s that there is always a way to get re-elected, no matter what.
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Ah, so true. And when you’re ready, there’s the ritual of retiring to sit on corporate boards that you did a good turn for.
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Interesting take on the photo prompt. I read it twice.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks for reading (twice!) and commenting, Susan. Much appreciated.😉😀
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Well done, interesting too!
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Thanks, Dee 🙂
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I really liked this. For some reason the line “Once again the child zealots had led them astray.” really stood out to me.
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Thank you, J. A. 🙂
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I have a great mental image of the “public” side of government, and then the little secluded rooms we can’t see where well-known politicians cluster around bubbling pots making dark deals 🙂
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Exactly! I wonder how close we would be to the truth? 🤔
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I’ll recite that next time I cook garlic and see what happens! A brilliant take Dora.
Here’s mine!
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The world will know when you occupy the throne of power! Thanks, Keith.
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I saw a documentary about the Bohemian Club. It’s a bunch of powerful men getting together in the woods to perform rituals and whatnot. The documentary made it seem much more seedy than Wikipedia. There might be more truth to your story than it appears.
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Frankly, I wouldn’t be surprised. Occult practices that were enacted in ancient Sumerian documents are all related to taking power and keeping it. The power-hungry haven’t changed a lot since that time. Not at all.
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politics is like garlic. once you ingest it, it smells bad in your mouth.
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Haha! No arguments from me on that!
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What a wonderful and original take, Dora. I really enjoyed this.
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Thanks, Dale. So glad you liked 🙂
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🙂
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Only the twist at the end revealed who this story was about. Very crafty tale!
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Thanks, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Great story!
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Thank you!
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The first paragraph especially is intriguing and mysterious! I enjoyed the feel of it. =)
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I felt like I was just getting started when I realized I only had a dozen or so words left to spare! Thanks, Brenda 🙂
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I love (or hate) when that happens. =) A beginning to a longer story!!
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So–I added a new word to my vocabulary. Had to look up “senex.” And I’m a bit confused, but every definition I saw said a senex was a wise old man. Yet your main character seems to be a woman. Am I missing something?
Anyway, you’re quite a wordsmith. This is intriguing, and easy to picture.
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You’re not missing anything but a very bad attempt at a pun, I’m afraid. I was using senex/senator as a foreshadowing device. 🤣 Thanks for reading, Linda — appreciate your comments very much 😊
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Fascinating spell. I wonder if it will work
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Haha. There’s the rub!
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So this is how those wise old wizards keep their political seats – ba-humbug for garlic.
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Heh. 🙂
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An intriguing take on the prompt, with a hint of treachery and … something else. Well done.
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Thank you, Sandra. Glad you noted the treacherous element as well.
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What a fun read. I’ve always wondered how some people got elected.
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Well now you know, and garlic spells are a tad better than black chickens at midnight, right? 😂Thank you, Russell.
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