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Genre: horror; word count: 100
Discovery
“Did you bring the mirror?” Eli asked.
Lena rummaged through her backpack behind him. “Do we have to do this?”
Eli snorted impatiently at his best friend. “Don’t you want to know why kids from this school have gone missing? Mr. Drobkoni’s gotta be a vampire. I’ll stay here. You keep a lookout. Whistle when you see him coming.”
“Right-oh,” Lena said. “Here.”
Eli held the mirror so he could see over his shoulder.
Lena had already left.
She’s fast, he thought.
“What’s that?” asked Lena behind him.
He turned around quickly. “The dead travel fast,” he said, suddenly pale.
Liked that one. Lovely voice you have, too. Thanks for the read and the listen.
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Aww, thank you so much, Bear. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Dear Dora,
Oops. Apparently Lena isn’t who Eli thought she was. Well done and I love the reading.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, dear Rochelle. I love hearing your readings too, and thought I’d try it for this one.
Aleichem shalom,
Dora
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You think you know a person and then, BAM. Nice work.
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Who can’t relate, right? Thank you, Honie 🙂
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Oops! Seems like Lena is already Mr. Drobkoni’s student. Nice twist in the tale.
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Glad you liked it, Subroto! Thank you 😊
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Eek! Good Halloween tale 🙂
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Thank you, Iain. Hope you had a good one. 🎃
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A lovely spooky tale that fits this time of year.
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Thank you! Glad you liked it 🙂
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Oooooo great story. Better run from Lena. Vampires at school… watch out.
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Time for Buffy to surface from Sunnydale High. 🙂
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My heart sank into my stomach when the realization hit him. Great storytelling, Dora, and all the better with you reading it.
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Aww. Thank you, dear Lisa! You cheer my heart tonight 😊💞
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❤ Happy to hear it!
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