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When Christmas Comes
As a child, Christmas decorations made her sick with excitement. Now they made her sick for those gone missing since the lock-down. They showed up in little boxes the home projected onto a screen, but she knew they were impersonators. She watched, but refused to speak to those teary-eyed strangers. Her own family was naturally cheerful, even boisterous. “Lord, where are they?” Every day she recited their names, rolling them in her mouth like hard candy. Every day there was less of them to remember. But Christmas came. Her heart burned. There was a Light to investigate in the heavens.
I loved the idea that the people on Zoom were imposters. There’s a full short story in that idea
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You’re right: in this age of lockdowns and videochats, can we really be sure we’re not being manipulated by the matrix? Thanks, Neil.
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A terrible year, and for many a terrible Christmas ahead. So many will be having the festive season without relatives. Let’s hope 2021 is looking up.
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I don’t think I’ve looked to a new year more, but I have a feeling that many things have been lost that will never be replaced.
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Sad story, nicely done.
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Thank you, Susan.
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So much has changed. This year people can only celebrate Christmas with those they live with. What about those who live alone. A sad tale of the times we are living in, Dora.
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There’s something very wrong in our approach to this problem. In Japan the suicide rate has soared to 13,000+ this year compared to 2,000 last year.
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Speechless. This captures so much… so very much. I usually put a picture on the tree for each person lost the past year. I can’t do that this year… there’d be no tree left. Too too many. Don’t even feel like celebrating at all. We cancelled T-day & Christmas this year for Covid. It’s going to be different, that’s for sure.
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Video chats are no substitute for the real thing.
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No, they’re really not.
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we’ve lost so much this year. small wonder, pandemic fatigue is getting into everybody’s nerve.
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Yes, we have lost a lot, but gained too an appreciation of what really matters in life.
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I live alone but I’m determined to have a fantastic Christmas, with or without visitors! Bring it on!
Here’s mine!
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I can go for that. I don’t think anything can keep you down, Keith. I can tell just by the stories you tell. 🙂
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Not alone – we’ll be with you in spirit! And … who knows, maybe online, too! 🙂 We’re a whole community here!
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Aww, thank you! We are indeed.
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Dear Dora,
Rolling on the tongue like hard candy. I love that description. Wonderfully written. I’m about ready to put our decorations up early just to add some cheer to the drear. The truth is lockdown won’t change our Christmas much since our family’s spread so far and wide. At any rate, good job.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you. It’s hardest for those who are in nursing homes in the last stage of their lives. This is the first year I’m going to put up decorations early so I know what you mean, “cheer the drear.” If any one can make Hanukkah and Christmas light up, it’s gotta be you with your cheerful energy.
Aleichem shalom,
Dora
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I breezed through your story, not paying close attention. Then I went back and REALLY read it, and it’s wonderful. Truly. I love it.
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So sweet of you to say so, Linda. Thank you! Truly appreciate your kind comments. 🙂
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The virus has been disorienting in innumerable ways. I can see where extended isolation can mess with someone’s mind. I can also see where the usual happy family members, now overcome with worry and anxiety, would seem alien when broadcast through a medium reserved mostly for fantasy and fiction. We are living in strange times and you have captured it so well in your story.
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Love your thoughtful comments, Lisa. Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome.
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Well done in depicting the disorienting reality of loneliness and isolation for so many.
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Terrifying in some ways. Thanks, Na’ama.
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It sure can be. It is so important that we try and mitigate in the best we can with the older people in our lives. Call. Write. Visit from outside. Make things together (and take photos, and share). And, yes, video-chat. But also call and talk and see if someone can check in on them – from outside and outdoors if need be. Connection matters.
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Indeed. We should be mindful of all that we can do, regardless of what we can’t. Everything kindness makes a difference, though we may not know it now.
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Yes, kindness is NEVER wasted.
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Very well written and captivating. A sad longing tone of loneliness.
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From James.
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Thank you, James.
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What a fabulous phrase: rolling on the tongue like hard candy. So descriptive and so apt. And can 2020 be over and the health of the world return so that we may see our families? Well done, Dora!
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I’m with you. Thank you, Dale.
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Very well written story for this time. I like the phrase, “Every day she recited their names, rolling them in her mouth like hard candy.” Reminding herself they are out there. I’m putting up my Christmas decorations today and video-chatting with my two kids who are an ocean away. One day at a time!
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So many I know are putting decorations up early and I am too. The lights will cheer and thank God for video chat! 🙂
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Unfortunately a tale of our times and tribuklations. Hopefully we’re not too far from the end of the torment
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That’s our hope. Meanwhile, we should have the freedom to determine when and what risks are worth taking.
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A hard hitting story of how isolation affects people, especially the older ones in our community. I’m glad her faith gave her a solid anchor, and she was able to look to Jesus.
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What a strong consolation we have in Him! As Christina Rossetti wrote,
“Love came down at Christmas,
Love all lovely, Love Divine.”
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