

Curtain Fall
He was a wandering musician, traversing continents, twanging on his banjo, a wordless witness to a universal language.
No one knew his origins.
Still the story is told that he came from another world. And one came seeking him whose betrayal had left him mute. Powerless to make him return, she took with her the memory of his youthful fingers dancing on strings, his eyes expressive of no other purpose than seeking nameless tunes of faithless love.
Raindrops fall like tears on tree-trunk curtains, ethereal remnants of her departure from this world.
In a midnight café, a tuneful banjo plays.
This is so beautiful!
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That photograph was inspiring :>) Thanks Lucy!
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Oddly disconcerting, and yet… beautiful. Loved it!
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Thank you, Bear. I enjoyed playing around with this one, so I’m doubly glad you liked it.
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We weave such stories around wandering minstrels
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They are an enigma, aren’t they? They are as much a part of the story as the tales they sing.
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I particularly liked, “Powerless to make him return, she took with her the memory of his youthful fingers dancing on strings”. It’s wonderfully ambiguous.
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I’m afraid the ambiguity is more due to word count constraints than clever design. But I’m glad you liked it anyway. 🙂 Thank you kindly, Penny!
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Love the mystery and the atmosphere.
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Appreciate that, Iain, thanks.
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Nice! Did the banyan inspire the banjo?
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Gee, I hope not! 😀
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Lovely, the Legend of the Wandering Minstrel 🙂
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You nailed it! Thanks Ali. 🙂
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Dear Dora,
Intriguing story. Altogether lovely.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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So glad you liked it, Rochelle. Thank you.
Aleichem shalom,
Dora
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A lovely tale, beautifully written.
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Very kind of you. Thank you Sandra. 🙂
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Absolutely love this, Dora.
Although I was baffled by ‘ tuneful banjo’!
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Banjos not very tuneful to ya? It’s an acquired taste! 😉Thank you C. E.
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A beautifully written tale Dora.
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Thank you so much Keith.
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There is sadness, music, heartbreak and beauty, all in so few words!
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Did I fit all that in there? You made my day Linda! Thank you so much. 😀
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This is a beautiful story, Dora. I love the words and the vivid descriptions.
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What a potent character. Enigmatic. I hope the musician makes a return.
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Who knows where the road will take him? Thanks for your comments Tannille. 🙂
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magical but sad.
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For now. 🙂
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A woeful yet magical tale, Dora.
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Thanks so much Brenda. 🙂
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Beautiful and sad. Well done.
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Glad you liked it, thank you!
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these wandering musicians are still around, here one day gone the next. I wonder are they real?
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Good question. 🙂
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So sad and so beautiful. I love this, Dora.
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Jenne, Grateful for your appreciative comments. Thank you. 😊
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Lovely and melancholy.
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Thank you Liz.
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Beautifully written, Dora, poetic and lyrical with some mystery twirled in.
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You make it sound much better than it is, Dale, like a dance! Thank you so much. 😊
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Now now… just take it 🙂
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🙏😉
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Mysterious. There’s a lot said in what’s unsaid.
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Thank you for that wonderful comment!
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I love this idea. That he walks still. Performing through the years. Touching lives but staying untouched in return. I imagine he will walk on forever
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I love the way you put it and so enriched the tale. Thank you. 🙂
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Mesmerizing and haunting. Maybe one day she will return and he will sing her praises again.
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Glad you liked it, Lisa. There’s always hope where love remains.
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