
Word Count: 100; Genre: Realism
The Only Way
“You’re in my world now. What do you think of it?”
“Like a fish out of water. Like I stand out in an unpleasant way, like I don’t belong.”
“Does that offend you? Want out?”
“Not really. I mean, it’s not your world I want. It’s you.”
“To know me is to know the world I came from. You understand?”
“I do. But you’re still missing the point. It’s you that makes my idiotic world and yours worth knowing. I couldn’t care less otherwise.”
“So our ‘love covers a multitude of sins’, in both our worlds?”
“It’s the only way.”
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields very kindly invites us to join the Friday Fictioneers in their weekly creative quests of a hundred words or less prompted by a photo.
The stranger really isn’t getting it, is he or she? I’d guess this relationship isn’t going to last. A thought=provoking portrait
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I think they get it at the end, but sometimes it takes a while.
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It’s a bit sad that he isn’t interested in the cultures for the cultures’ sakes, but at least he makes an effort for her.
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I think he’s going to discover that there is only one culture that matters and that’s them.
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This is so true: “To know me is to know the world I came from.”
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We do carry our world(view) with us, which is why it’s so important to perceive it accurately, the good, the bad, the ugly.
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It’s sad, I’ve seen these sort couples. For a happy relationship, both parties need to embrace each other’s culture. Thought provoking story D!
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Sometimes cultural hangups get in the way but true love trumps them all. Thanks Tannille.
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I guess you can’t have one without the other, people come with their background and family and culture as part of the package!
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Family opposition is the most hurtful. It takes a lot of love to overcome cultural barriers. But love is the key.
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I’m sure they will click completely eventually 🙂
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Love triumphs. Culture is superficial and surmountable. 🙂
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A thought provoking piece. Well done
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Thank you kindly Sandra.
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A great illustration of what happens in a mixed cultural relationship. For me, they are aware, they’ll work it out. They’ll be fine!
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I think so too Jenne! Thanks so much for reading.
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What an interesting story! Marriage can work across cultures, when both partners are prepared to make the effort, just as your story says.
One of my nephews has married a Korean woman. He learned Korean, persuaded her father that a foreigner could make a suitable husband, and now works there as a teacher. They have two little children and are seemingly very happy.
When I was reading your story it occurred to me that as well as being a love story, it could also be a parable. I’d love to know if that thought was in your mind!
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I always enjoy your comments Penny. Thank you. I think the parabolic quality organically evolved from its lighthearted beginning as the dialogue suddenly took a serious turn. I like the happy ending to your nephew’s love story. I imagine his father-in-law took a lot of winning over. It’s sometimes harder for the older generation of extended family but a devoted couple can change hearts and minds with God’s help.
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An interesting spin on a romance. Well done.
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Thank you Mason.
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You’re welcome.
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Love IS truly blind. That’s all I’m gonna say…
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That’s all you need to say, with its implied caveat to “Keep your heart with all vigilance, for from it flow the springs of life” as the proverbs say.
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the only think it would work is to hear what a wise man said, “if it’s not to your liking, change your liking.”
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👍I can go for that.
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learning to love each other from different worlds, is like learning to swim in the sea.
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Quite a challenge. Thanks for reading James.
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A thought-provoking piece. I hope it works for them, but there are definitely hurdles in the offing.
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It’s challenging to shed the trappings of culture for a greater good, in this case, true love. Thank you for reading.
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Dear Dora,
A lovely romance made real in the dialogue. I hope they come to a complete understanding.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
That’s the ending I would like too! Thank you for your kind comment.
Aleichem shalom,
Dora
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Indeed, it is the only way. Lovely piece, Dora!
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So glad you liked it! Thank you Brenda.
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Aw, love concurs.
Lovely story
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Absolutely. Thank you. 🙂
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Thought-provoking. I like it.
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Thank you Linda. 🙂
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