
The sun had taken flight with midnight near
The killer stops uncertainly, afraid,
Behind a sound he hears, sinister, clear,
A hollow breathing, ice-cold hand now laid
Upon his shoulder, grips; he springs away,
As if the fiends of hell were at his heels,
But still pursued, his face with terror, gray.
At last he turns, with courage bold, then squeals
As dead Lucille peals, “Now see how it feels!”
Well, Halloween’s just around the corner isn’t it? 🎃👻 Update: And right on cue, I’m number 13 on Mr. Linky! Haha.
Laura at dVerse's MTB: "Since today is the 9th of the 9th month it is fitting for that numeral to inform today’s poetry form – so let’s meet The Novelinee!. . . Yes, it’s a nine line stanza poem overlaid with this rhyme sequence: a,b,a,b,c,d,c,d,d" also written in iambic pentameter.
Love this, very timely, and humorous too. Well done.
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Bytesized,
Thank you so much! I’m really glad you enjoyed it. :>)
pax,
dora
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“You picked a fine time to [scare] me, Lucille.” (apologies to Roger Bolling and Hal Bynum)
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Haha! Now THAT made me laugh! ;>)
pax,
dora
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🙂
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Well that ending line was a surprise one. But the killer gets the taste of his own medicine. Just timely for spooky fun October.
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Wow! Dora… this is quite a switch for your in your writing… A chilling tale indeed! Great work.
Good to see the Jolly Beggar again!
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The ending is a surprise!! Great build-up, Dora.
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wow, wow, WOW!
murder, mystery, horror! Dora… this just… just… I seriously adore this piece…
❤
David
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a fun Halloweenesque novelinee Dora but beneath it all that vengeful wish: “the killer stops uncertainly, afraid,”
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I love how the killer got his comeuppance in this spooky tale, which to me carries echoes of Macbeth!
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This made me laugh out loud! Perfect. Thank you!
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Your tale gripped me from the beginning to the end! Fantastic, Dora.
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Lucille’s revenge…cool & creepy novelinee!
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Oooh, I enjoyed your dark novelinee! Definite Halloween vibes 🙂 I like the spooky image too!
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Perfect pitch. Not everyone has your ear 🙂
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Vivid and surprising. I’ve already been feeling the Halloween spirit, too.
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Only a month away… but the beginning of autumn begs for the ghosts to come. Love how you describe the hunt.
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Excellent horror writing.
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Jude,
Glad you liked it! Thanks.
pax,
dora
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