
Along the rolling hills I hear
your mournful singing haunting clear
yet windblown.
Under the moon’s vapid eye
how can I, elf, to you deny
your windsongs?
I’ll keep you under lock and key
lest you flee and escape from me
as windstorm.
The elvish king shall have you back
when he returns the one I lack
now windbound.
On Hallow’s Eve we’ll make a swap
my child returned, you with your harp,
— home windward.
Grace at dVerse challenges us today to write a Compound Word Verse, an unfamiliar form to most ous I daresay. She writes: "The Compound Word Verse is a poetry form invented by Margaret R. Smith that consists of five 3-line stanzas, for a total of 15 lines. The last line of each stanza ends in a compound word and these compound words share a common stem word which is taken from the title. (In the first example below the stem word is “moon” from the title “Moonlighting”; the compound words related to the title are moondust, moonbeams, moonsongs, etc.) The Compound Word Verse (3 lines) has a set rhyme scheme and meter as follows: Rhyme Scheme: a,a,b Syllable/Meter: 8, 8, 3 Click on Mr. Linky to read more and join in!
The story knocks this reader. You make this look effortless even with the rigid form Dora. Love the ending verse which harkens to the Halloween theme:
On Hallow’s Eve we’ll make a swap
my child returned, you with your harp,
— home windward.
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Really into Halloween as you can tell, and it was great fun working with the new form. Thank you, Grace. I’m so glad you liked it.
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Such a mystical tale with clever wordplay. You rocked this form! 💞
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Thank you Tricia! 🧡❤️🧡
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Enchantingly beautiful, Dora – perfect for the time of year!
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This was very well done, Dora, and in keeping with the spirit! 😊
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Thank you, Punam! 🙂🧡
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My pleasure. 😊❤️
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I felt the wind in each stanza …. well done!!!
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Awww thanks, Helen! I’m happy you liked it!
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Nice second effort!
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You’re kind to comment on both, Beverly, thank you!
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This seemed so effortless. I love the wind words, and the changeling story. It’s like an old ballad.
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Thoroughly pleased you enjoyed it, Merrill, thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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This has a wonderful timeless feel. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe, for taking the time to read this one and commenting too! :>)
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Wow! You aced the form, Dora! And very apt for the spirit of Halloween.
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Thank you, Eugi!
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Most welcome, Dora!
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Love the mythology here… a story of getting a child back with a trade. The wind words are a great choice as it can seem the elfs communicate with wind.
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Love your comment. Perhaps the wind association suits elves in our mind because they seem more free-spirited than we are. Myths are elusive and allusive.
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