
He’s got no heart
that’s plain for us to see
yet adamantine
chains of our own greed
mocking bind our flesh
permission securing to multiply
lies that his desires ours would circumscribe
She’s got no heart
that we all clearly know
obscure it we must
the voters to con
paid consultants we
diabolical masters creating
sly illusions to blind our client’s tribe
Lisa at dVerse: Poetics -- "Halloweeny Humans" asks us to write about a dislikable human trait. She also introduces us to a new poetic form, the Duodora, which we can choose to use. Duodora Form a quatorzain made up of 2 septets. syllabic, 4/6/5/5/5/10/10 syllables per line. rhymed Axxxxxb Axxxxxb L1 is repeated as a refrain that begins the 2nd stanza. x is unrhymed. Enjoy more at Mr. Linky.
Dora, your disdain comes through loud and clear in your powerful duodora. They truly are puppetmasters who play to our weakest/strongest desires. Extra candy corns for admirably meeting the challenge!
“adamantine
chains of our own greed
mocking bind our flesh”
and
“diabolical masters creating
sly illusions that blind”
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How could I pass up the opportunity of dissing this slimy bunch! Thank you, Lisa: truly enjoyed the challenge 😀🧡
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You’re most welcome, my friend, glad you enjoyed it.
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We got extra candy corns! *strut, preen pose* We definitely live in a world where actual truth is trampled beneath agitation and obfuscation, all to the betterment of people who really couldn’t care less about anything but themselves and the acquisition of power. It’s frightening.
On a happier note, the little dog on your header is such a cutie pie!
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You’re right of course. We’re seeing how frightening it can get in real time. The more freedom we give up w/out a fight, the more they take away. Easier to give up, than get back too.
That cutie is my buddy who died three years ago. Miss her but she’s in a better place. 🙂❤️
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This is exquisitely woven, Dora! 🙂 I especially like; “obscure it we must/ the voters to con/paid consultants we/ diabolical masters creating/sly illusions that blind our client’s tribe.” You rocked the prompt! 💝💝
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Thank you so much Sanaa!
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Far out! You mastered the form and rocked the prompt. Cheers for dissing politicians. So much of our present chaos is linked directly to their fat butts and greedy ways.
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I knew you’d agree! 😀 Thanks, Glenn.
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Deceiving political consultants – all of them just greedy. Good work on the form Dora. You made it look so easy.
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Thank you, Grace. 🙂🧡
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You picked a fitting subject, and executed your poem with flare: great work, Dora!
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They make themselves easier targets of contempt by the day. Thank you, Ingrid!
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Well written Dora — well conceived!
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Old faces, new antics! I’m less amused by the political elites as time goes on. Thank you for your comment, Rob!
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Well done Dora. What a way for some to earn a living! You highlighted the political underbelly 😳
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It’s diabolical. The conniving and self-serving rewarded and the rest mere pawns in a game of power. I wonder if we’ll ever see a real change for the better. Thanks for reading, Christine!
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I think we have traveled so far off course we might never find our way back. It’s awful the way society is behaving right now. 🥲
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That’s my fear as well. Whatever we do to advance dialogue away from from the politicized social media hoard we should not tire of doing.
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That’s our only hope 😦
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You are right… politics is a scary diabolical game! Like going through a cemetery at night!
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Ain’t that the truth?!! And who are the real “players” hiding in the shadows, sucking the strength of nations and their peoples? It’s amazing that for the first time in American history one percent of the country owns as much wealth as the entire middle class combined. Can we really trust the current crop of politicians to fix this as the decline of the middle class continues?
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I doubt it very seriously!
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Round ’em up, move ’em out … love your take on the challenge and the way you used adamantine here.
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Thanks, Helen. And I agree. Let’s get a new crop in to clean up the mess.
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You’ve nailed it. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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That was fittingly biting, Dora! Duodora, indeed! (Couldn’t help it😀)
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*long-suffering sigh* Okay, but at least it wasn’t Explorodora. THAT’S no doubt another upcoming poetry form. 😅
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Lol That was lame but couldn’t help myself. 😅
Waiting eagerly for Explorodora. Keep it simple, by the way. 😀
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– ¡Por supuesto!
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👍🏼
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Here, we call them lobbyists. As you say, heartless and in pursuit of vested interests at everyone else’s expense. You Duodored it!
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Forget the lobbyists at your own peril! They are knee deep in it. Thank you, Sean.
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“paid consultants we
diabolical masters creating
sly illusions to blind our client’s tribe”
POWER in these words!
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We have allowed ourselves to become just factions and tribes to be manipulated, haven’t we? What a fool’s game that nobody wins! Thanks for reading, Lillian.
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If only they carried out their tricks solely on Halloween. Hard-hitting duodora, so well written.
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If only! Thank you so much, Marion.
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