

Your pipe tobacco
Sears like your red beard
Against my skin
Enflaming
Swirling taut nostrils
Your smoky grey eyes
Promising new intrusions
Of incense-breathing flame
As we talk and the day softly fades
Into an Orient-soaked night
Where the moonflower opens and glows.
It’s good to be back at dVerse’s Poetics with guest host Jo who asks us to find inspiration in “a world of common scents”!
Very lovely poem Dora
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Sadje! Thank you 💝
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Loving the vivid imagery in this poem! ❤
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Glad you enjoyed, Jaya 🧡
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Welcome back, Dora ❤ Wonderful erotica bathed in scents.
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Thank you Lisa ❤️ Good to “see” you 🤗
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You’re welcome ❤
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So pleasant, I really loved it!
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Thank you 🧡
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I wonder if the scent says more than a thousand words. Love your words
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Absolutely. Thanks Björn 🌹
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You captured that specific smell and moment in time. What a lovely orient soaked night!
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Thanks Grace 💖
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this is great. enjoyed this
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Glad you did! Thanks for visiting 😀
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Hello Dora! Hi! I’m so happy to see your post and we’re glad to know that you are back! Blessings to you and your family!
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Right back at you, my friend. You were not forgotten. Blessings galore. 🙏
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Wow, Dora(h)!
How are you? It’s been a while since I’ve had the pleasure of reading your poetry…
❤
David
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It’s good to see your smiling face again in my comments, David. Looking forward to catching up soon ….
Dora(h)💙
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I am reminded of how much I enjoy the scent of pipe tobacco ….. well done.
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Thank you Helen 💝
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This is wonderful! I especially like; “Your smoky grey eyes/Promising new intrusions/Of incense-breathing flame.” 💖💖
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Hi Sanaa! Thank you so much 💝
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Dora, so good to read your words again!
How have you been?
This is lovely! I love the smell of pipe tobacco.
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Hi Punam! So good to see your sweet comment. Thank you 💞💞💞💞
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You are most welcome. ❤️❤️
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This poem is like a glass of good red wine – rich and slightly intoxicating and coloured like a jewel. Really gorgeous. I love the last line.
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Thank you for that generous comment 🌹🌹 (Great prompt btw)
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This was rich and wonderful Dora — strong finish. Excellent!
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Rob, Thank you 💚
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